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One of the things I wanted to take advantage of with the coloring was to have a bit more fun with the Atra’novalis, and make it a lot more colorful when one has been activated.
Where did his sunglasses go…? I didn’t want to keep drawing them so let’s just say he tucked them in his pockets off screen.
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I was debating whether I should tag characters who aren’t on screen but are talking, or characters who are barely visible. In the end I decided yes, so Pandora gets a tag here, yay.
If you’re reading this for the first time, you don’t know who that is yet, so just put a pin in it for later.
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Lest anyone actually confuse me for a decent artist who knows what they’re doing, it took until today to realize I kept switching which side Remiel’s buttons were on. One thing you might notice in general is that I am terrible at keeping track of right and left. When I make mistakes like this, I usually update it here on the main website, but I usually don’t bother with all the mirror sites. When it comes to their dominant hand, just assume everyone’s ambidextrous, because there’s no way I’ll be able to keep track out it.
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I really didn’t wanna redraw Remiel’s hand because I hate drawing hands but it looked so bad I gave in. It was worth it, but ugh. I even used a 3D model for reference and it still took me a stupid amount of time to not look terrible.
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You literally just got here! Come back!
The biggest change to this one is mirroring the top panel and removing the background from panel 2 because it made no sense for him to be sitting on the window side of the booth.
The entire restaurant scene was a mess. He only recognizes Remiel when he brings their food which means… They had drinks already, but Jocelyn didn’t bring it to them? And Jocelyn’s bringing them their food but he didn’t take their orders? I changed the dialogue to compensate for that, but now he’s leaving despite supposedly covering someone else’s shift? I suppose he could have stayed past his shift to cover for someone who had to leave early, but still… they need to pay for their food..! I suppose Jocelyn trusts Remi enough to leave the payment on the table but…! You! Won’t! Get! Your! Tip! (Maybe Remi gives it to him when gets home…?) All in all, just don’t think too hard about it.
(You can date how old the original page is by how dated the phone model is… He’ll probably get an upgrade because I no longer have that phone as reference.)
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